The warm Sun.
Always shines.
Laughter rings.
And smiles are seen.
Families spread out.
Eating picnics on the lawn.
There is no such thing as regret.
And worries don't exist.
The only memories kept.
Are the happy ones.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
I feel like it was cut too short.
ReplyDeleteI really love the begining though.
Expand a little more by maybe adding more to the family part.
There is no such thing as regret.
ReplyDeleteAnd worries don't exist.
The only memories kept.
Are the happy ones.
favorite lines.
good job!
I agree with Okie.
ReplyDeleteI really like the lines,
There is no such thing as regret.
And worries don't exist.
I do feel like it could be added onto; Jackie is right about it seeming cut short.
It's really cute, though. It has a really happy feel to it. I like it. [: